Me and Imogen have been working on a writing piece called The two girls in the hall we have been working on this for two days its not very long and it ´ s incomplete. I hope you enjoy reading it is about a girl getting murdered by an old lady named Imogen and there is two girls in a hall trying to warn me not to go back to her house I dont end up listening and go back to Imogens caboin and she shows me Olivia’s body and goes dont worry your next. The genre of my story is a horror
Here is our writing piece
The two girls in a hall
One stormy day, I was walking through the woods alone when suddenly out of nowhere I saw a dark spooky house. The door slowly creaked open so I decided to go inside and there was a very long dark hallway that looked like it never ended. There were two girls in blue dresses, both of them had blonde hair and blue eyes and there was one difference about them… one was taller than the other. I asked “What’s your guy’s name?” They responded in sync “ We are Summer and Willa” they strangely did not blink all they did was stare into my soul which terrified me.
I walked away and I found myself in the living room where I saw a girl with glasses, dark brown hair and brown eyes. I couldn’t tell how tall she was because she was sitting down. She asked “Hello, what’s your name? I’m Imogen Miles, I’ve been living here in this broken down house since 1961 and have been stuck here ever since.” “My name’s Pixie-Rose Te Wani” I had heard stories about someone named Imogen and she was a murderer but this girl is probably someone different. She ended up inviting me in for a hot chocolate and some fresh cookies. I went and joined her on the dusty couch and she started asking me about a girl named Olivia and if I had ever heard the story of her death. “ No I have never heard of a girl named Olivia or her story, can you please tell me about it ?” She froze, without moving a single muscle and said “ I bet your parents are worried… why don’t you run home. Come back tomorrow and I’ll tell you all about it”
I walked out of the room but as I opened the noisy door Summer and Willa said “ Don’t come back she will try and kill you! Please just stay away” I left and started thinking if I should go back, if I should stay home or should I tell someone? There were many questions but no answers. I went back home just in time for dinner, which was my mothers iconic bowl of mac n cheese. At dinner my mother asked “How was your day ?” I told her all about my day but I kept the house in the woods a secret.
I headed to my room, that’s where I saw it… a small letter lying on my bed. I called out to my mother and asked if anyone was in my room today, she replied instantly “ No, is something missing?” “ No nothing’s gone missing, just making sure” I said back. I was scared to open the letter but my gut told me to read what the letter said so I opened it and started reading:
Dear Pixie-Rose
It´s Summer and Willa here. We are begging you please stay home. Please, she is trying to kill you. Just this once trust us.
PLEASE STAY AWAY.
I was confused after reading the letter, why did it make me want to go back more? I ended up getting into bed and going to sleep.
The next day it was warm and bright. I got out of bed and mum must have already headed to work and dad still hadn’t gotten back from his work trip so I was in the house alone. It was quiet not a good quiet a very scary quiet
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